Christopher Aruffo, MFA, MBA, MSc, PhD
A line may not have enough syllables to fill the required space. To resolve this problem, you need to increase length. You can expand syllables to make them fill the space, or you can insert pauses to stand in for missing syllables and feet.
Lines should be equal to each other, but every foot requires at least one long syllable. A line may not have enough long syllables to support the required number of feet. When this happens, you can create more long syllables by stressing shorts.
An example can be found in Shakespeare's Othello. One of Cassio's verses, spoken naturally, produces an unequal line. The line needs five feet, but it has only four long syllables.
, , , , ,
This ve|ry night | at one | ano|ther's heels, (five feet)
, 3 3 , , ,
And ma|ny of the con|suls, raised | and met (four feet)
Stressing a short syllable helps create a fifth foot, making the line equal.
, , , , ,
This ve|ry night | at one | ano|ther's heels, (five feet)
, , , , ,
And ma|ny of | the con|suls, raised | and met (five feet)
Any short syllable can be stressed. It won't always work-- you can't put emPHAsis on the wrong sylLABle-- but you can always try it. When there aren't enough long syllables to fill out your feet, try stressing shorts.
| , , , , ,
My for|mer speech|es have | but hit | your thoughts, , , , , 2 , Which can | inter|pret fur|ther: on|ly, I say, , , , , , 2-> Things have | been strange|ly borne. | The gra|cious Dun||can , , , , 2 , Was pit|ied of | Macbeth: | marry, | he was dead: 2 , , 2 , , , And the right|valiant | Banquo | walked too | late; XXX , , 2 , , , Whom, you | may say, | if it please | you, Fle|ance killed, , , , , , For Fle|ance fled: | men must | not walk | too late. , , , , , Who can|not want | the thought | how mon|strous XXX , , , , , It was | for Mal|colm and | for Don|albain , , , , , To kill | their gra|cious fa|ther? damn|ed fact! , , , , , How^it | did grieve | Macbeth! | did he | not straight , , , , , In pi|ous rage | the two | delin|quents tear, , , , , , That were | the slaves | of drink | and thralls | of sleep? , , , 2 , , Was not | that nob|ly done? | Ay, and wise|ly too; , , , , , For 'twould | have an|gered an|y heart | alive , , , 2 , , To hear | the men | deny | it. So that, | I say, 2 , , , , , , He has borne | all things | well: and | I do think XXX , , , , , That had | he Dunc|an's sons | under | his key-- , , , 2 , 2 , As, and | it please | heaven, | he shall not--| they should find , , , , , 2-> What 'twere | to kill | a fa|ther; so | should Fle||ance. , , , , , But, peace! | For from | broad words, | and 'cause | he failed XXX , , , , , *** His pres|ence at | the ty|rant's feast, | I hear , , , , , Macduff | lives in | disgrace. | Sir, can | you tell , , , Where he | bestows | himself? XXX *** line has been changed XXX line is still unequal 19 out of 24 lines are now equal. |
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