Christopher Aruffo, MFA, MBA, MSc, PhD
A line may not have enough syllables to fill the required space. To resolve this problem, you need to increase length. You can expand syllables to make them fill the space, or you can insert pauses to stand in for missing syllables and feet.
Sometimes a line just doesn't have enough syllables, period. Even when every syllable is as long as it can naturally be, you may still find a foot that's missing a syllable, or a line that's missing a foot. Whenever this happens, the empty space can be filled with pauses.

"Empty" feet are filled by pauses.
Pauses finish unequal feet and balance unequal lines. Pauses can be any length, and they can be placed anywhere that English grammar will allow. Pauses can be marked with circles to suggest empty space. A dot can represent a short pause, a circle a long pause, and two circles for a full foot.
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Stay, | speak, | speak, | I charge | thee speak.
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Shall be | an end|less theme | of praise
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And love, | a sim|ple du|ty.
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I have | a lit|tle step|son
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Of on|ly three | years^old |
Pauses are essentially silent syllables. In fact, "adding" a pause doesn't add anything new to a verse; rhythmically, the syllables are already there. Marking pauses makes those hidden syllables visible.
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My for|mer speech|es have | but hit | your thoughts, , , , , 2 , Which can | inter|pret fur|ther: on|ly, I say, , , , , , 2-> Things have | been strange|ly borne. | The gra|cious Dun||can , , , , 2 , Was pit|ied of | Macbeth: | marry, | he was dead: 2 , , 2 , , __ And the right|valiant | Banquo | walked too | late; , , 2 , , , Whom, you | may say, | if it please | you, Fle|ance killed, , , , , , For Fle|ance fled: | men must | not walk | too late. , , , , , , Who can|not want | the thought | how mon|strous XXX , , , , , It was | for Mal|colm and | for Don|albain , , , , __ To kill | their gra|cious fa|ther? damned | fact! , , , , , How^it | did grieve | Macbeth! | did he | not straight , , , , , In pi|ous rage | the two | delin|quents tear, , , , , , That were | the slaves | of drink | and thralls | of sleep? , , , 2 , , Was not | that nob|ly done? | Ay, and wise|ly too; , , , , , For 'twould | have an|gered an|y heart | alive , , , 2 , , To hear | the men | deny | it. So that, | I say, 2 , , , , , , He has borne | all things | well: and | I do think XXX , , , , , That had | he Dunc|an's sons | under | his key-- , , , 2 , 2 , As, and | it please | heaven, | he shall not--| they should find , , , , , 2-> What 'twere | to kill | a fa|ther; so | should Fle||ance. , , , , , But, peace! | For from | broad words, | and 'cause | he failed XXX , , , , , His pres|ence at | the ty|rant's feast, | I hear , , , , , Macduff | lives in | disgrace. | Sir, can | you tell , , , oo oo *** Where he | bestows | himself? | | | *** line has been changed XXX line is still unequal 21 out of 24 lines are now equal. |
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